Wednesday, July 2, 2008

half the story

The wind through my hair the speed, the rush, its all in side of me, keeping my identity is the only thing that is important in my life right now. Flying is my life living is not. My wings carry me I carry nothing not even my eyes. Yes I m blind ever since 6years ago. That’s when I took my first flight, it was dark I was scared, I lifted if the ground I started to fly .I had no clue where I was going then I ran in to a tree. Two of the branches poked my eyes’ got up I looked around but it was pitch black. Right then I was so freaked out I passed out’s awoke in a women’s house my nose filled with the smell of fresh apple pie. a women’s voice asked me what my name was I said'kidiana'.i could tell she didn’t like me by my name so that’s how I ended up here alone and scared and worst of all desperate. In the city I can only walk and find what I need. One day I ran into a boy about my age around 14.he had black hair sky-blue eyes. His voice was handsome when he asked are u o.k. said'no'.'Why'.'i can’t see’.’ your blind aren’t u'.yes'.take my hand.'ok'.'Whats Ur name'? kidiana I said. That’s very pretty, I felt myself turn 7shades of red. His hand felt so soft. He guided me some were warm. That’s urn name I [link] are we? Were at my house. It’s very warm. Thank you. Then I asked the question’ can u fly? He asked do u trust me. Yes I do. Then hold on.The wind through hair the speed the rush its all real .zacks arms held me by my waist. I looked up even thought I couldn’t see. His smile warmed my heart! I said u have wings don’t eyes I do to. U does! Whatch my wings exploded from my backs could tell sack was very happy! Zack.yes.will u teaches me to fly? Yes .thank u. I....... its ok u doesn’t have to repay me! It was early when I woke could here sack breathing heavily. I found my self being watched by Christiana, I asked do you do this every day’s don’t need no back sass from those scientist. I am not a scientist. Why doesn’t u look at me while I am talking to u? I have my reasons. Then sack woke or he was silently listening. She has her reasons Christiana. Shut up sack I don’t need any back sass from u tosses blind idiot, and she is not a scientist. Then who is she urn girlfriend. No she is one of us u retard. Huh I thought were the only ones. How did mom. She is not related to us, and never brings up that back stabbing beep mother of Ares. But zacky. leave now. But now and no buts.FINE, kidiana could feel sack kissing her neck. Now sack doesn’t be mad at urn sister she did not know. Come on kidding lets change the subject, did I ever tell how pretty u look in those knee high torn jeans. Kidiana blushed so hard. Christiana walked in and said break it up u love birds. We have trouble.Sack said kidding cans u fight. Why would I not be able to-do be such a sneaky brat. Christiana. Sry tacky. Today was my first flight lesson with zack. He said to put my has up, keep my wings out, and think "flight". Before I knew it I was flying right beside Zack. Everything was going fine until the wind picked up. I couldn’t keep my wings straight. My wings buckled in. I couldn't move. I started to drop. I could hear Zack calling down "Keep your wings straight!" I felt myself begin to fall faster. Next thing I knew I'd hit a tree. I felt instant pain, and I was getting closer to the ground. Then I stopped. I felt arms come up around my waist. I could tell it was Zack's firm but gentle grip. "Are you alright?" he asked. Oh, yes jus fine except for this little thing-the stick through my arm!" "Well, I guess that might be a problem!" he said. I could sense his warm but worried smile. "Guess what Zack?" "What?" "We are hovering above the ground; don't you think we should get back down to earth anytime soon?" I asked. "Oh, yeah we need to you to the infirmary." "No I 'm fine, really.” I said. "Yeah you just have a stick through your arm that won’ stop bleeding." he said "No real- OW, ow, ow!" I gave impact was cradling me in his arms when we walked in. their she was the devil child taping her foot saying’ well what took u so long stuck on the rode of life!''''And maybe we were''.zack, u know I have feelings for u but not feelings like u have for me. Dead silence filled the room. the stone look and said "Fine but YOUR paying for it!"right then I just said the wrong thing at the wrong time’s went to zacks door I could here him talking to a women’s walked in and said zack are u who is that ..........child.kidiana please meet my new girlfriend max. my mouth dropped 200 floors when he said that. ur dating that little slu-hi max hows iggy and fang?u smell like fresh apple pie max. I just baked some recently you’re that women from the forest aren’t awaiting that story u told me about when u was a kid’s told him that story. Ah ha so u are the women in the forest. God I am so stupid.zack put his hand over maxs mouth and said that’s enough of Ur nonsense!!! Max struggled a bit, freed herself from Zack's tough but NOT gentle grip, and flew out a window. The next day Fang and Iggy came over to question us about Max's latest mood. "We just want to understand why Max has been so bitter." said Fang. We haven’t seen her like this since Sam broke up with her." added Iggy. Zack sighed. "I don't know, I haven't been here recently." He lied. Fang leaned forward and grabbed Kidiana's hand and said "Tell me everything and I will be forever in your debt my lovely one."Ack had to restrain myself from knocking the daylights out of Fang. Before Zack could finish her thought. A soft cry came from the doorway ''iggy''!!Christiana is that u! U too knows each other?"Zack asked. Christiana and Iggy both put their hands over their mouths and shook their heads "no”. A few days later fang came back while zack was gone. Fang asked the question that made me write this story. Fang asked me to dinner, and said I am leaving the flock will u join me on my mission? What is Ur mission if I may ask? Fang got down on his knees got her hand and reached in his pocket and took out a velvet box with a ring in it, and asked ''will u marry me''?! "Well what about Zack and-" "Don't worry about us, we don't need you!" said Christiana. "Thank you Christiana!" I said. "No prob." "Well Fang, yes, and yes! Zacks POV the next day when Zack got home he asked Christiana where Kidiana was. "With Fang." answered Christiana. "Where with Fang?" asked Zack. 'Read the note on the dresser next to the rose you gave her." Zack rushed into the other room, and the note said: dear zack, Fang asked me to marry him. Christiana said that you didn't need me anymore. So I decided to marry Fang. Love or should I say sincerely, Kidiana P.S. I should have told you I used to love you but you got mad. "Well what about Zack and-" "Don't worry about us, we don't need you!" said Christiana. "Thank you Christiana!" I said. "No prob." "Well Fang, yes, and yes! Zacks POV the next day when Zack got home he asked Christiana where Kidiana was. "With Fang." answered Christiana. "Where with Fang?" asked Zack. 'Read the note on the dresser next to the rose you gave her." Zack rushed into the other room, and the note said: dear zack, Fang asked me to marry him. Christiana said that you didn't need me anymore. So I decided to marry Fang. Love or should I say sincerely, Kidiana P.S. I should have told you I used to love you but you got mad. I searched for kidiana but no luck, each night iggy comes and visits me.days, weeks, monthes, and even years have passed since I last heard my loved ones voice again. the school and the flying refrigerators are gone well that’s what fang would call it ...just saying his name makes me want to beat the day lights out of him.iggy and Christiana got married and as soon after their marriage was over the school came back! Today is the day we meet the head person at the school .we all walked in and only one word was said MAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1 comment:

vivian said...

Awesome story!
-Christiana [the person who wrote HALF the story]